The sun was shining bright and we were off to the Parnell baths. It was packed with people ready to have fun. and as we arrived I could hear the sounds of laughter and excitement. And the best thing is, it was free for kids under 16 and adults were quite cheap too. We found a good place to put our things and then I ran straight to the pool.
It was salt water so it was just like being at the beach. The first thing I went to was the warm pool with the park, slide and fountains in it. It was awesome. Next I went into the cold pool and jumped off the diving board. After that I went into a hot pool and it was really relaxing. I had a great time there.
We stayed there for quite a while until it was near closing time. It was one of the best days ever. It was time to leave and we were all hungry. We stopped at the dairy and I bought a mince and cheese pie and a choc bar ice cream. What a delicious treat.
I arrived home and happy to see my baby brother but he was fast asleep. I just felt like resting after a long day. I hopped on the bed, turned the television on and fell fast asleep after a big day. I was dreaming of the lovely day I had.
2 comments:
Hi Destiny,
What an awesome story! I really love all the ambitious vocabulary. I really loved how you had paragraphs and punctuation in the correct place. I have never actually bee to the Parnell Baths, it sound super fun. Keep up the good and exciting posts.
Hi Destiny,
I like the words that you have used in your recount and you make me want to go to Parnell Baths.
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